Rich and Poor

Diary recounts written in the first person and present tense.

Diary of a rich child in Victorian London

I awake to the sound of crockery clinking and a general bustle downstairs, Millie, the maid knocks politely on my door and enters almost immediately after – she never waits for an answer. Morning Miss, she says with a small curtsey, time to get ready for the day. Your father wants you in your white dress, it’s that photograph today. I emerge from my bed slowly, the air is chilly as the fire has not yet been lit.

Moments later, I enter the parlour dressed in my finest white gown with my hair tied neatly in bunches. Morning father, morning mother I say as I sit at the table. Morning Emily, smiles mother. Father is reading the paper and doesn’t respond. We breakfast mostly in silence, toast and eggs and a warming cup of tea with sugar until mother announces that the chimney is to be swept today at seven and my governess Mrs Henderson will be arriving shortly after that to attend to my learning for the morning. Even on a Saturday, I have to learn, it’s not enough that I attend school, father says; if I want a respectable position in society and a good man to make me an honourable wife, I have to be learned. Most of the time, I just want to play. I have a few friends at school but most of them have a governess like me so we rarely get to play and have fun. I have toys and lots of them; my dolls house is a delight and my grandmother purchased paints and paper for my birthday that are lovely. I so do love painting.

Millie enters to collect the breakfast items and lets us know that the sweep is here. I ask to be excused and leave the table. I know I’m not supposed to go into the drawing room when the chimney is being swept but I love to see other children and the job is so fascinating; how boys fit up there is astounding. Father once told me that chimneys are not straight, they are a complicated series of twists and turns. I’d almost like to see one for myself if it weren’t so positively filthy. Opening the door, I see the man gathering up his tools of the trade and just see a naked boy scuttle up the chimney. One moment, his pale lower half was hanging out of the chimney and then he was gone. I couldn’t help blushing and coughing nervously. The man turned and saw me, Mornin’ missy.

The doorbell rang, Mrs Henderson had arrived. Today would bring handwriting, poetry and reading. Mrs Henderson is like a mother to me, her, Mrs Winters – the nanny – and my real mother all look after me but really I just want my own mother. She’s far too busy in the day though. Breakfasts and supper are the only time we see each other. I am grateful that I live in my wonderful house but sometimes, just sometimes I do wonder what it would be like to have a large family and to do exciting things like climbing chimneys. If life were different, I wonder what job I would do…

Morning Emily, time for handwriting, I have a lovely poem about the seasons for you to scribe.

My day begins…

Diary of a poor child in Victorian London

My day starts early, as it always does. If it’s not the wetting of the bed by one of my brothers that wakes me and forces me to get out of bed, it’s my father. I’m only nine-years-old yet I have to work. Every day. We all do actually, except Maisie – she’s only two. There are nine of us in our family: mum, dad and seven children and we all work, some work at the match factory on Fletcher Street, although I’ve heard some scary things about that place – Phossy Jaw I’ve heard about – horrible; my two older brothers shovel dung and mud off the road for the rich folk so they don’t dirty their precious clothes; and my youngest brother, Edward, scuttles up chimneys all day long and I have that joy too.

Today is a good day, mother packs me off with some hard bread and a bit of cheese in a dirty handkerchief. If I’m lucky, Bill – my owner – will grab me an apple from a cart. I’ve been tempted to do that myself several times but I don’t want to get into trouble. I heard from another sweep that he saw someone steal a hot roll from a baker’s and he ended up inside. Prison, that is. I grab my lunch, kiss Maisie and dodge a playful slap from Tommy, the eldest, he’s strong but he isn’t as fast as I am. Father shouts at us all to get moving: it’s dawn he says, time to get moving and get earning. Bread doesn’t grow on trees you know!

My meeting place with Bill is outside the bakers, the smell of freshly-baked loaves is almost too much to bear; if I didn’t know any better, I’d say he does it on purpose to keep me shinning up those filthy chimneys. Chimneys don’t clean ‘emselves you know, boy. He sounds like my father. Walking round the corner with his tools of the trade, comes Bill. He sees me, spits and ruffles my hair. Ready to earn some bread, boy? He never waits for an answer, just sniffs in the delicious scent of the bakers and starts strolling off. Bill is tall, taller than my father and I have to run to keep up with his monstrous strides.

We near the first house and enter through the scullery. Bill prepares the grate, as ever. Cloths out, tools placed on the hearth. I strip naked so as not to get soot on the rich folks’ rug and place a hand on the chimney walls – good, not hot. Taking a deep breath, I ready myself and enter the darkness. It’s easier now than it used to be – I’ve done hundreds of these things but the darkness still makes me feel so alone, so desperately alone. I often dream about being a rich boy in a house like this when I clean and scrape choking soot from the brickwork. If I were rich, I would give my sweep a hot chocolate and a fresh loaf. Sweeps do such horrid, back-breaking work, they deserve it. I’m covered in cuts and grazes and my hands are never clean. The darkness from the chimney comes with me, like a constant reminder of my role in life.

Fourteen hours later, exhausted and sore, I arrive home with my pay: one penny for fifteen chimneys. Bill did get me an apple, so that’s a good thing. Soot cloaks me from head to foot, it’s in my nose, my ears and everywhere. I hand the penny to mother who ruffles my hair producing a mini-soot cloud, she smiles and tells me that we will be eating soon. Another day is over.

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